Pitch for music magazine

Today we completed our pitch for our magazine, we had a sheet which we wrote down all our ideas for each little detail of the magazine, i.e. house style, audience profile, images, dps, inducements, our usp, and weekly or monthly price. We researched on the internet prices of magazines of the genre we'd chosen, what sort of elements the magazines included and who the audience is. To figure out things like the house style, fonts and how we are going to have our titles etc, we opened up photoshop and played around. This was my first trial of my title, but i came to the conclusion that not everyone may understand what it stands for.

So i altered it to a more simple design but which i think worked better. It also benefited me because my final title goes with my house style alot better.