Up to date draft of contents page

This is the drawing draft I completed for my contents page after the first draft. This is where I made changes, as lots of elements in my first draft were weak. I made sure my main text in the kind of mid centre is in line an not all out of place everywhere. I made captions for the pictures seperate an moved them next to the picture, instead of all together in the bottom right hand corner. I cut down my 'comment from the editor' as it was taking up a lot of my page an looked messy so I tidied it up. I used a text box also to make it stand out on the page. I also put my certain page numbers under specific headings. I benefited from this as each page with related stories are under the same heading so if someone was looking specifically for gigs they could look at the heading gigs an events an see which pages they are on. It's made my contents page look alot more professional, how ever it still needs some more work.